Many manufactured food and drink products contain high levels of sugar, which causes many health problems. Sugary products should be made more expensive to encourage people to consume less sugar. Do you agree or disagree?
These days, many people are suffering from health problems. One of the most common diseases is diabetes which is caused by consuming foods which is too sweet.
As a result
, some people opine that these goods should be harder to access by increasing their price. From my point of view, I completely disagree with Linking Words
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opinion and find better ways to solve Linking Words
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problem. In the upcoming paragraphs, the reasons and solutions to support my disagreement will be outlined.
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of all, making sugary products more expensive is unfair to the customers. They should have to pay more to be these goods. Linking Words
In addition
, it might not affect someone who has enough money. They will continue to consume it no matter what it cost. Linking Words
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, the government can reduce Linking Words
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high consumption by putting a tax on sugar so that the manufacturers will find other ways to create unsweetened products. Linking Words
For example
, beverage companies are competing in a healthy food market in Thailand for their merchandise. The shoppers Linking Words
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have more choices to choose and sugar consumption in Thailand is steadily decreasing.
Meanwhile, the government should improve the health of their citizens by providing much information about the harmful of diabetes or diseases caused by eating too much sugar so that people will have an awareness of Linking Words
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, they should make healthy foods more affordable. Linking Words
In other words
, a primary reason that convinces a customer to purchase is price. If it is costly, they will buy a cheaper one.
To sum up, I am totally against Linking Words
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opinion. I believe that adding prices to sugary foods or drinks is not the best solution to reducing sugary products consumption. There are more effective methods, Linking Words
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as taxing sugary beverages or giving health information in Linking Words
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a way that society is less interested in it.Linking Words
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