You are applying to get admitted to an educational programme at a university abroad. Specify what you want to study and write a motivation letter, including the following points- • What attracted you to this particular programme, reason for wanting to study- your motivations and ambitions • How your current study is relevant and what your academic achievements are • Why you are suitable- extracurricular activities, hobbies and other experience related to your choice of programme.

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Dear Sir/Madam, I am writing in connection with the literature educational programme at Harvard University. I have always dreamed to study abroad. I believe that a degree from

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school would be great for my CV. I am currently attending the high school

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Hristo Toprakchiev in Bozhurishte, Bulgaria. My academic achievements are gained from various exams, programmes and school activities. I personally believe that there is no better place to continue my academic career. I made

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research and found that the experience of

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programme is connected with my most loved hobbies and activities. Some of them are group reading and outdoors literature classes. I would appreciate a reply from you. Yours faithfully, Naya Filipova

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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

firstly
secondly
thirdly
in additional
moreover
also
for example
for instance
therefore
however
although
even though
despite

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 6.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

118 words

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