Some people say that the main environmental problem of our time is the loss of particular species of plants and animals. Others say that there are more important environmental problems. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

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technology areas and big cities,
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to the environment. Their groups claimed that the key
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of the decreasing amount of flora and fauna. In my opinion, the loss of any
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is important, but it is just one of the most serious
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, and we have to consider and solve all
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our Earth. Basically, there
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various
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environmental
issue
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issues

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that
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have to notice. One of the most terrible
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affects
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which influence
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the ecosystem

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is pollution and it impacts
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many natural resources
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, mostly
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air and water. Every contamination means that the health of
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is decreasing because of the dust
in breath
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and the
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liquid appearing in drinking water.
Other
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futher
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reason which appears accidentally but
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is
deforestation
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. It minimizes the oxygen from the photosynthesis of plants. In 2020, the world lost
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plenty of fresh air from the
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in Amazon. Some citizens think that the
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of several
species
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is the most crucial cause. The slashes
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the
amount
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of trees and the
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of plants in the world which make for the drugs or different
purpose
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minimize the space for
animals
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existing and living. Because of interrupting the food chain of the habitat, many
species
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do not have enough food for living and become endangered. It directly
change
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many features of
environment
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and
emerge
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more natural
disaters
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disasters

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, it is
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narrow-site thinking. The contamination and
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which
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mentioned
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leads
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to the loss of plants and
animals
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. People
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many tons of trash to the sea, and marine
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find it
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when
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at
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the
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human’s
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waste.
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, fishers find a turtle having
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straws
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in the nose and
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animal heavily moves in the water. The vanishing of
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of trees from
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makes
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lose the suitable area. In conclusion, the small-scale quantity of
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is not more important than various tough
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issues. The pollution and
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not only cause unhealthy
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damage the
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of many
species
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. There are different way to solve all of
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as using renewable sources, annual planting forest,…. and I
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that our Earth will be
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someday.

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Topic Vocabulary:
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  • extinction
  • habitat loss
  • ecosystem
  • food chain
  • imbalance
  • interconnected
  • climate change
  • pollution
  • personal actions
  • policy changes
  • education
  • awareness
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