Some people say that the main environmental problem of our time is the loss of particular species of plants and animals. Others say that there are more important environmental problems. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

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technology areas and big cities,

human

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consider their huge

damge

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damage

to the environment. Their groups claimed that the key

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problem

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the problem

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is many different

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affecting our nature

instead

of the decreasing amount of flora and fauna. In my opinion, the loss of any

species

is important, but it is just one of the most serious

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, and we have to consider and solve all

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aspects

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to

resurvive

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survive

our Earth. Basically, there

are

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various

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a various

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environmental

issue

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issues

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that

human

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humans

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have to notice. One of the most terrible

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effects

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affects

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effects

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which influence

ecosystem

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the ecosystem

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is pollution and it impacts

on

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apply

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many natural resources

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such

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on

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air and water. Every contamination means that the health of

human

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is decreasing because of the dust

in breath

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and the

posionous

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poisonous

liquid appearing in drinking water.

Other

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futher

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further

reason which appears accidentally but

seriouly

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seriously

is

deforestation

. It minimizes the oxygen from the photosynthesis of plants. In 2020, the world lost

the

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plenty of fresh air from the

deforestation

in Amazon. Some citizens think that the

disapperance

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disappearance

of several

species

is the most crucial cause. The slashes

of

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the

amount

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number

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of trees and the

divesity

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diversity

of plants in the world which make for the drugs or different

purpose

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purposes

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minimize the space for

animals

existing and living. Because of interrupting the food chain of the habitat, many

species

do not have enough food for living and become endangered. It directly

change

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many features of

environment

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the environment

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and

emerge

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more natural

disaters

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disasters

.

However

, it is

a

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narrow-site thinking. The contamination and

deforestation

which

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mentioned

also

leads

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to the loss of plants and

animals

. People

throw away

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many tons of trash to the sea, and marine

animals

find it

diffucult

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difficult

when

face

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at

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the

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human’s

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waste.

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, fishers find a turtle having

a

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straws

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in the nose and

this

animal heavily moves in the water. The vanishing of

amount

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the amount

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of trees from

deforestation

makes

animals

lose the suitable area. In conclusion, the small-scale quantity of

species

is not more important than various tough

envinronmental

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environmental

issues. The pollution and

deforestation

not only cause unhealthy

body

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bodies

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and less fresh atmosphere but

also

damage the

ecosytem

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ecosystem

of many

species

. There are different way to solve all of

issues

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the issues

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which

is being estimating

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and

exmining

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examining

such

as using renewable sources, annual planting forest,…. and I

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believe

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belive

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that our Earth will be

restore

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someday.