Some people decide to start their own business instead of working for a company or organization. Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantage?

Self-employment has always been viewed as the best type of

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occupations

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and some people have been trying to run their own

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businesses

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business

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instead

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of being recruited by companies for years.

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it might be preferable to be employed by others, being self-employed suffers from the disadvantages that leave them with a great amount of expenses and little time for themselves. The following essay will look at two reasons that I believe make

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phenomenon negative.

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, running new businesses

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owners to invest a lot of money to compete with successful existing companies.

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is because for a small company to be known they need to either have good advertisements or provide better services.

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, it is hard to encourage a customer to buy sneakers from an unknown brand

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they are satisfied with Nike or Adidas

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unless these new products are being advertised by famous people who charge them

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a lot

to introduce

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new product on

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social media.

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competitory

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competitive

environment of

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industry, being successful needs

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to spend

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a lot

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, owning a business gets several hours of a day to regulate

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, especially if it is new.

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, an employee usually works for specific hours a day and

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remain

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at home

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owners not only should work during those hours but

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are usually involved with the job at their homes.

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, the owner of a new company receives several phone calls from different employees out of

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and

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to manage all for their business to be remunerative.

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, they are busy every

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and are deprived of an off day, which employees are

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privileged

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to have.

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,

self-employement

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self-employment

might have a good image, but I believe its disadvantages negate its benefits. For a new company to grow, owners should spend most of their money and time.