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You missed an international flight due to a problem at the airport. Write a letter to the airline. In your letter: * Describe what happened that caused you to miss your flight * Explain how missing your flight impacted you * Clearly state what you would like the airline to do

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Dear Sir, I was extremely happy with the ticket when I booked online easily.
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 letter to express my dissatisfaction with the airport system which
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 encountered a problem. Unfortunately, the plane had a technical issue with my destination flight and it was not my fault.
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, I missed the flight. As I described above, I had a business trip to Dubai, where I was supposed to attend a seminar as a financial consultant. I had arranged my trip for two days in advance to draw up for the conference myself.
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, I prepared a variety of lectures and research
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for the past couple of months.
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, my career future has been tied with
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 trip.
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, I hope
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 matter will be resolved and I expect that finding an alternative flight will reach
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Dubai as soon as possible.
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, I had to request a full refund ticket and pay the price as compensation. I look forward to receiving a prompt reply. Yours faithfully, Mustafa
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Address how you followed airport procedures and explicitly state the problem that caused you to miss your flight for a more complete response.
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Include politeness markers and formal language to maintain a consistent suitable writing tone throughout the letter.
coherence cohesion
Use clear paragraphing with each paragraph containing a clear central idea for better logical structure of your letter.
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Ensure smooth transition between paragraphs with cohesive devices for better logical flow.
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