Mrs Barrett, an English-speaking woman who lives in your town, has advertised for someone to help her in her home for a few hours a day next summer. Write a letter to Mrs Barrett. In your letter :  Suggest how you could help her in her home.  Say why you would like to do this work.  Explain when you will and will not be available.

Dear Mrs Barrett, I would like to write in regards to your recent commercial in a local newspaper, asking for aid for a short duration of time every day in upcoming summer. I have been through the advertisement and would like to assist you with the mentioned chores,

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as cleaning the garage, maintaining the lawn, and garden, and

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decorating your living room.

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of all, I would like to mention that, I am a very social person, and I am very interested in helping others, while I practice the same at my home by lending a helping hand to my family, and to my

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in day to day activities. The prominent reason behind my application is that I am trying to collect funds to get admission to the Engineering college of Ontario, which has been the dream of my life.

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, the financial status of my family is unstable.

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advert would definitely help me to achieve my educational goal.

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, I would like to mention that, I would likely be available from 13:00 Hrs till 16:00 Hrs during weekdays only, as I am

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practicing Guitar classes in the evening. Hope you find me a suitable candidate for

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work, and I would really appreciate it if you could review

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. Looking forward to your positive reply. Yours sincerely, Rahul More.

rahulmore07Fri Apr 15 2022

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Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

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Single idea per paragraph

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Lexical resource: 8.0

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