People who decide on a career path early in their lives and keep to it are more likely to have a satisfying working life than those who often change jobs. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is often argued that exploring your

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at an early age and keeping it would be more likely to lead to a satisfying working experience compared with changing

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often. 

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interest and developing it constantly would help

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have higher achievement in their work, I think that for some specific cases

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crucial for success.

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with, I strongly believe that

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need to map out their

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at an early age because when they are younger, they have fewer restrictions, by

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I mean, when

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are in their early

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, they have fewer financial and family obligations, they can on weekends or late evenings which can help them accumulate their knowledge and experience. 

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, early

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exploration would possibly mean a faster cooperation ladder climbing and a better earning which may lead employees more satisfied with the

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they do. 

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, there are so many positions that need special licenses and qualifications. These things would take years to have, so the earlier you start, the sooner you will get them to help you to be qualified and have a probable

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promotion in your

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. 

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, an early decision

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probably means a better recovery from your mistakes. When

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are younger, they mostly have more time and courage to afford the mistakes

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. When you have the chance to correct your mistakes and stick to the right

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, success would come earlier and easier.  Despite

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support the belief that changing your job sometimes can help you have a better opportunity to be successful, especially in the recent era. With the quick development of society, many

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have no choice but to switch their careers to keep themselves engaged or challenged. 

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, in recent China, teachers from private training schools have to change their

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due to the policy changing of the government. In

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case, keeping yourself active

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job-hopping is a good way to go through risks and challenges from inevitable changes. Changing

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means you are trying to foster new skills and gain new knowledge for a new position. Job hopping can

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 bring a higher salary according to some research findings.  In summary, I agree that building up your

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early and sticking to it is a good way to be outstanding

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other employees, but in

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certain situations, changing your job is

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required.