People who decide on a career path early in their lives and keep to it are more likely to have a satisfying working life than those who often change jobs. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is often argued that exploring your
career
path
at an early age and keeping it would be more likely to lead to a satisfying working experience compared with changing
jobs
often. 
Although
 I agree that an early foster for
career
interest and developing it constantly would help
people
have higher achievement in their work, I think that for some specific cases
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change is
also
crucial for success.
To begin
with, I strongly believe that
people
need to map out their
career
at an early age because when they are younger, they have fewer restrictions, by
this
I mean, when
people
are in their early
career
path
, they have fewer financial and family obligations, they can on weekends or late evenings which can help them accumulate their knowledge and experience. 
Therefore
, early
career
exploration would possibly mean a faster cooperation ladder climbing and a better earning which may lead employees more satisfied with the
jobs
they do. 
Secondly
, there are so many positions that need special licenses and qualifications. These things would take years to have, so the earlier you start, the sooner you will get them to help you to be qualified and have a probable
further
promotion in your
career
Lastly
, an early decision
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a
career
path
probably means a better recovery from your mistakes. When
people
are younger, they mostly have more time and courage to afford the mistakes
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career
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. When you have the chance to correct your mistakes and stick to the right
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, success would come earlier and easier.  Despite
this
, I
also
support the belief that changing your job sometimes can help you have a better opportunity to be successful, especially in the recent era. With the quick development of society, many
people
have no choice but to switch their careers to keep themselves engaged or challenged. 
For example
, in recent China, teachers from private training schools have to change their
jobs
due to the policy changing of the government. In
this
case, keeping yourself active
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job-hopping is a good way to go through risks and challenges from inevitable changes. Changing
jobs
means you are trying to foster new skills and gain new knowledge for a new position. Job hopping can
also
 bring a higher salary according to some research findings.  In summary, I agree that building up your
career
path
early and sticking to it is a good way to be outstanding
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other employees, but in
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certain situations, changing your job is
also
required.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • career path
  • job satisfaction
  • professional goals
  • climb the career ladder
  • develop expertise
  • long-term commitment
  • financial security
  • varied experiences
  • prevent monotony
  • job security
  • career progression
  • personal preferences
  • industry dynamics
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