Most of the people spend money without thinking about saving it for future. What are the main reasons ? Give your opinion.
The majority of the population do huge expenditures unconsciously keeping zero
amount
ahead. In order to fulfil their immediate needs as well as because of the expensive ,world
they tend to restrain themselves from saving. Add an article
the world
a world
This
essay will discuss the main reasons before giving my opinion.
Today's individuals are lacking patience and they invest a great budget for immediate satisfaction. By doing this
they lose their money with nothing on
aside. Change preposition
apply
For example
, commonly people
are found more into shopping such
as clothing, furniture whose amount
decreases once bought ,unlike lands or jewelleries
which tend to increase over time.One very important thing about the extensive facilities of providing Change the wording
jewellery
pieces of jewellery
a Credit cards
to the population left and right so they feel very easy and tempting to buy any Correct the article-noun agreement
a Credit card
Credit cards
amount
of whatever goods they take fancy as they think they have all the money in their hands forgetting that one day they all have to pay back everything to the bank. I, think this
kind of unhealthy habit should be modified by keeping aside at least 5 per cent of monthly income into
a high interest saving account at a bank.
Change preposition
from
Moreover
, another reason for randomly spending the
high number of income is due to the expensive market. Nowadays, the cost of every item has soared compared to the past. Correct article usage
a
This
left citizens with no choice than
to spend all their money. For an instance, the cost of gold in the Correct word choice
but
nepali
market has sky-rocketed crossing a hundred thousand for a tola; in the present year 2022, Change the capitalization
Nepali
however
, it was below 50 thousand just a decade ago. I, think people
should always buy judiciously rather than going on a shopping spree to buy any damn things they have their eyes on.
In conclusion, expenses done by people
have peaked then
it's saving. In order to get on the spot happiness and skyrocketed pricetag in the commercial sector has
compelled Correct subject-verb agreement
have
people
to invest keeping zero amount
in the bank as saving for future
.Correct article usage
the future
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite