Your child is going on a school trip abroad for three days and the headmaster of the school has asked any parents if they would like to come along to assist. You would like to go. Write a letter to the headmaster. In your letter: Say why you would like to go Suggest what you could do to help during the trip Ask some further questions about the trip
Dear Paul Brown,
I am writing
you
regarding Change preposition
to you
upcoming
trip Correct article usage
the upcoming
organize
by the school to New York Wrong verb form
organised
city
for three days asking Change the capitalization
City
to
parents to Remove the preposition
apply
accompant
their children.
Am very Correct your spelling
accompany
delightened
to come along with my children as Kevin Correct your spelling
delighted
have
some health issues and Correct subject-verb agreement
has
need
medications Correct subject-verb agreement
needs
on
Change preposition
at
desired
time it would be great if Add an article
the desired
i
could be there with him so there will be less chance of missing his meds.
Change the capitalization
I
Furthermore
, few
years back Change the article
a few
i
was working in a construction company in the same city Change the capitalization
I
who
Correct pronoun usage
that
take
contracts Correct subject-verb agreement
takes
of
many towers am still in touch with them and Change preposition
for
currenty
they are working on Correct your spelling
currently
Trump
Tower building which is the most common visitors attraction.I can certainly help you Correct article usage
the Trump
getting
Change the form of the verb
get
a
good Correct the article-noun agreement
apply
discounts
for Fix the agreement mistake
discount
same
.
Eventually, Correct article usage
the same
i
would like to Change the capitalization
I
clearify
that Correct your spelling
clarify
did
you Unnecessary verb
apply
checked
with the Change the form of the verb
check
amusment
park office are they open or still close? Have you finalized the departure dates ?
Please feel free to revert me looking forward Correct your spelling
amusement
for
your response.
Yours Sincerely,
Bruce JohnsonChange the preposition
to
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite