Many historic buildings are being destroyed or replaced. What are the reasons for this? What should be done to preserve these buildings?

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history
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can watch not only
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the historical
buildings
are very
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of
history
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itself
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it self
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.
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esssay
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we will discuss the
bevaviour
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behaviour
of some governments of demolishing the old
buildings
under the name of
renew
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. It is really horrible to destroy old
buildings
, especially when you have another
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empty
place to build a new one. I really feel sorry for old
buildings
because it is
the
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history
, we can learn a lot from
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visiting
it
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them
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Building
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is not only
brikes
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bricks
brakes
bikes
or woods no. It is the
civaliation
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civilisation
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itself
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it self
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. If old people
for example
destroy pyramids can we know
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anything
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any thing
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about the ancient Eqypt ?? no way
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I
supprot
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support
the UNESCO to act against some governments who demolishing the
hertige
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heritage
here
. The empty land is
to
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big, why
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do
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they
destraoy
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destroy
destroyed
the old
buildings
and not
building
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build
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new constructures. I strongly believe that
destroy
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destroying
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old
building
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no
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less
thau
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than
killing people
therselves
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themselves
.
Finally
, I hope the world organizations will work together to protect the
buildings
from
gready
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greedy
ready
businesmen
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businessmen
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