In the future, nobody will buy printed newspapers or books because they will be able to read everything they want online without paying. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Nowadays, technology has developed by leaps and bounds that make our life easier. Apparently, we rather reading something on the internet than
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newspaper
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or
books
.
This
will lead to media disruption.
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, it will be disappeared
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our life. I do not believe
this
notion because the following reasons. It is irrefutable that internet users
who
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read everything on digital platforms.
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,
Facebook
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on Facebook
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, Twitter,
users
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and users
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are trend to
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increase. Due to it is more
convenience
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, economical and faster as well.
Which is
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not only
people
 can go through it for free but
also
can
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the information or data from various resources on their screens. It is
agood
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a good
good
for
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a student
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student
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students
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who can not afford to buy
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text
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textbook
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book
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books
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.
Moreover
, there has more
entertainments
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and various
of
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knowledges
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knowledge
pieces of knowledge
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in any field to learn. It can be seen from
Covid-19
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pandamic
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pandemic
that more and more
people
stay at home. If they want to read something and try to avoid infection, they will be able to read something in
online
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the online
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library
instead
and study on
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the e-book
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e-book
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.
For instance
, cooking , gardening, science, sport,
linguistic
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and
economic
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.   
However
, nowadays paper-based is
trend
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a trend
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to going down and less popular than in the past. But there are some
people
who love reading and  have hobbies are
books
collecting.
For instance
, Harry Potter ,
Shakespear
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Shakespeare
, rare
books
and antiquarian
books
. Some of them are
unvaluable
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invaluable
and
irreplacable
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irreplaceable
thus
, these
books
have sentimental to collectors. Especially , Old
people
and
bookworm
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. They will not read these
books
on the web
instead
.    To conclude, it is true that  networking
platflom
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platform
platforms
is widespread. In
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, everyone can access it easily and
free
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while
,
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some
people
still
reading
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the book or
paper based
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to
therefore
,
i
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believe that in the future newspaper and
books
will not fade away from our
life
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, yet
it
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will still exist.         ​
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • accessibility
  • convenience
  • cost-effective
  • cultural value
  • sentimental value
  • reliability
  • distracting
  • access to
  • digital devices
  • internet
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