The maps below show the centre of a small town called Islip as it is now, and plans for its development.

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the current and the developments planned for

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of the

center

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of a small

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called ISLIP.

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the plans are to develop with the construction of more facilities and the residential

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.

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of some places. Currently, the countryside is located in the north of the

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.

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,there is a number of shops along both sides of the main road to the north and south ,respectively. And we can see that

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main road which has two side roads ,one leading to the

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and residential

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at

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and south of the

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center

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and the other to the

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at the southeast runs from west to east.the residential

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is in the south between a

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the west and a

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at

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the east. In

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map the countryside is planned to

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from in the north of the

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. the main road

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pedestrians. after which the shops along

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the north side of the new pedestrian’s street

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planned to be demolished to have more space for a bus station, a shopping

center

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and a new housing

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. There are plans to remain the shops along to the south of pedestrian unchanged. Only the

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and

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will maintain their original position

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the

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will be expanded and the

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shrunk,so more new houses can be built in the south. It is

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planned to develop

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carriageway around

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town

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