When choosing a job the salary is the most important consideration. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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there are different factors.some people believed that the most important factor that should be considered is having a high

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.I strongly disagree , I believed that other considerations

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satisfaction

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and a good

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with colleagues and employers are more important .

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with , lack of

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satisfaction

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leads to lack of motivation at

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comprises time flexibility , perks and holidays which can enhance the level of motivation at

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employees are more willing to do their

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. It has been witnessed that many people quit or change their

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due to a lack of sense of happiness and

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they receive a decent

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and easily can fulfil their dream

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as buying a luxury car. A good

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is another factor that I believed is more important than high income. Getting a positive vibe from employers and other colleagues makes a sense of consent and happiness even more than receiving a high

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issue we can imagine a person who has a high income but suffers from depression is caused by excruciating relationships at

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have a negative impact on his family

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. To conclude, having a high

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can provide for your mundane needs but it does not guarantee your happiness, I believed that other factors

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satisfaction

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and a good

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with the employer and other colleagues are more important.