In Britain, when someone gets old they often go to live in a home with other old people where there are nurses to look after them. Sometimes the government has to pay for this care. Who do you think should pay for this care, the government or the family? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
It is common in most developed countries that
people
are in the Use synonyms
last
stage of their Linking Words
life
they prefer to live in a nursery home. Use synonyms
As a result
, the additional cost is increasing. Some Linking Words
people
argue that the family should take responsibility for the cost due to the relevance of the family blood issue. In my opinion, I personally think that the government should take responsibility for taking care of retired Use synonyms
people
.
Beginning with the Use synonyms
first
reason, the mid-Linking Words
life
generation should have a chance to keep their money for improving themself or expanding their business. Time of middle age Use synonyms
people
is a crisis in Use synonyms
life
because some Use synonyms
people
start their own business, start a new job or start to build up themself in their career path. The Use synonyms
system
of the Use synonyms
country
should help them to take care of their parent. Use synonyms
For instance
, a developing Linking Words
country
Use synonyms
such
as Thailand has not set up a Linking Words
system
to support the old Use synonyms
people
. Delaying the build-up career of their child has occurred. Use synonyms
As a result
of nation's economy is slower progression. Linking Words
Moreover
, the Linking Words
people
who do not have their own children might be abandoned. Use synonyms
Secondly
, since the community had paid their Linking Words
taxes
to the government during their active Use synonyms
life
so they deserve the excellent Use synonyms
system
for their sedentary Use synonyms
life
. It is the basic requirement of a good Use synonyms
system
in a developed Use synonyms
country
. Use synonyms
For example
, in England, Britain's population pays Linking Words
taxes
at a very high level. The Use synonyms
country
takes care of them in their late time of Use synonyms
life
without any family disturbance.
In conclusion, the government should take responsibility by paying all costs for old Use synonyms
people
. For the reasons above, the benefits outweigh its drawbacks including Use synonyms
taxes
and economic issues. Use synonyms
Taxes
should return back to the population as well as allow middle-aged Use synonyms
people
to work without any obstruction will help economic progression.Use synonyms
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