Some people think that increase in international travel has a negative impact on the environment and could be restricted. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

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The demand for international travel has increased in the

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few years. Even though travelling by plane is easier and more affordable nowadays, it negatively impacts the environment.

Aviation

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carbon

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emissions are significantly harmful to the atmosphere and

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tendency should be curbed. I agree with

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statement to a large extent.

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we must be aware that

aviation

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is a fossil fuel industry. There is no other way to move millions of people daily through the sky

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by burning tons of dirty fuels.

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, if

aviation

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was a country that might be ranked like Germany or South Korea in terms of daily

carbon

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emissions. Another problem could be the fact that flying is more affordable for everyone.

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, people

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already used to fly are doing it more frequently. Despite the tendency of the global industry to decrease its environmental impact,

aviation

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is not running in

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way. It is still a very unregulated sector and governments are not enough interested

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. Politicians should encourage airlines to be aware of

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serious problem. Finding alternative sources of energy or using electric planes might be effective measures to be taken.

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, the foster of alternative transport means to be used for travelling like bus or train.

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, a

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tax is by far the most important to implement right now. In conclusion, the increasing use of planes for travelling has a negative environmental impact. Citizens and governments must be aware of

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problem

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new policies have to be taken to reduce

carbon

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emissions from the aeronautics industry.

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task response

Improve the clarity and relevance of examples to support the main points.

coherence and cohesion

Include a stronger introduction and a conclusion to effectively frame the essay.

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meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 6.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

262 words

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carbon footprint
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ecosystem
sustainable travel
eco-friendly
carbon emissions
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resource depletion
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environmental impact
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