In some countries, owning a home rather than renting one is very important for people. Why might this be the case? Do you think this is a positive or negative situation?
It is believed that
people
refer
to Correct your spelling
prefer
buy
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buying
house
because it can bring long term benefits to the owner. In my opinion, whether it is a positive or negative situation, there are many factors that impact people
from owning a home and renting one
.
Clearly, owning an apartment is probably to solve many problems. Having a permanent property will create the
feeling of safety. Unstable market and inflation are factors Correct article usage
a
could
make money Correct pronoun usage
that could
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to loose
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lose
loose
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lose
their
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its
prize
. Having an apartment as soon as possible Correct your spelling
price
mean
that Change the verb form
means
people
may do
not worry about monthly rent. Unnecessary verb
apply
Instead
, they only focus on other important things such
as working or studying. Moreover
, people
feel more confident about what they are owning. In other words
, they have a property in hand and get the feeling of the owner. Another reason for owning a house
is better than renting one
is the freedom and comfort. They can decorate the house
in any style that they prefer. From furniture to the color
of the wall without asking for permission from anyone.
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colour
of
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apply
people
claim that hiring an apartment is better than buying Add an article
the people
one
. Instead
of spending huge of
expenses to buy a permanent property, they can use that money to invest in other things Change preposition
apply
such
as stock or gold. The profit from the investment will be spent on buying a house
in the future. This
smart strategy is widely used by today's young generations. In my opinion, I do not agree with this
because investment is too risky and nothing makes sure that we probably succeed. In case of bad things happened, I believe that we should own a house
.
To conclude, owning a house
may be better to rent one
. However
, it depends on the needs of each person. Before purchasing a home, there are various advantages and disadvantages to consider.Submitted by trankhanhnhi on
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite