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As countries become more developed, many fast food outlets move into the country giving local people greater access to fast food. Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?

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As we know, most countries are developing rapidly today.
This
 causes some problems.
For example
, fast
foods
 are needed
people
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 than other
foods
. It is good or bad? In my opinion,
world
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which
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 we live is changing. Most things replaced their new module nowadays. For
instace
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instance
,
foods
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food
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. They are not news at present. Fast
foods
 are very common everywhere. Because they are very delicious.
In addition
, it is easy to make them and not waste too much time. If people are hurrying and they need a meal, they choose fast food.
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this
way
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 they save time and money.
Besides
, it is not necessary
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lot of
product
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make them.
On the other hand
, they are harmful
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 peopleʼs health. It is difficult to digest them after eating. There are
not
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 vitamins
which
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 are necessary
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 organisms . According to research, they cause get flatted. To sum up, people eat fast food only limit. It helps them save their money, time and health
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