You saw an advertisement for a tennis course in England but you have one or two problems and can’t stay the whole course. Write a letter to the course director. In your letter, explain your interest in the course describe your problems find out if a refund is possible

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Dear Sir/Madam, My name is Shekhar Chhabra

last

week I saw an advertisement for your tennis course in the newspaper.

Firstly

,I am very pleased to tell you playing tennis is my hobby and I felt very amazed when I get to know about the course you faculty starting in Shivnath Academy.

Secondly

, the place is near to where am currently residing and takes me a maximum of 10 minutes by foot.

Thus

, I decided to enrol for the same and paid the fee for the course online using my debit card.

However

, I want to bring

this

to your notice that I would not be able to join the batch because of some serious issue.Unfortunately yesterday I met with an accident and got my left leg broken doctor suggested bed rest for at least 4 weeks.

Therefore

, am seeking a full refund and I am sure you must have a money-back policy if do kindly let me know the procedure. I hope you will understand my situation and will do the needful, waiting for your positive reply. Yours faithfully, Shekhar Chhabra

Submitted by chhabra.shekhar on Sun Apr 17 2022

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Topic Vocabulary:

course director
inquire
attend
commitments
refund
partial refund
alternative solutions
improve skills
unfortunately
unable
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