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Write a motivational letter of application for a course abroad

#application #course
Dear Sir/Madam, I am writing to you to apply to the educational
programe
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programme
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 the university abroad. My reason for applying
the
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 special course is that I want to study the course of online marketing. The thing that attracted me most is that the course is free and you will have a special certificate that can help to get the dream job. My motivation and ambition
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 to study marketing because
this
 is my dream job and I have a lot of ambition. At the moment I am studying marketing and I want to continue my education abroad to have more experience in other countries,
also
 I am working in
online
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 shop for clothes and I am the director of marketing. I have different hobbies the most lovely is that I have skills in
programing
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 online sites and that can help me in the marketing. I hope I get accepted
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 the educational program
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 your university and have the chance to learn new things. Yours faithfully,
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Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • motivated
  • aspiring
  • dedicated
  • education
  • career objectives
  • enhance
  • expertise
  • innovative
  • contribution
  • achievements
  • credentials
  • perspective
  • enrichment
  • diverse
  • aspiration
  • commitment
  • professional development
  • beneficial
  • insightful
  • diligence
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