An English-speaking friend is visiting your region for a couple of weeks during his holidays and has written you to ask for travel recommendations. Write a letter to you friend.

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Hello Lizzi. It was

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great hearing from you. I hope we can meet up while you are in our republic. Anyway, I just wanted to tell you about some must-have places in North Ossetia.

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of all, I’ll be very glad if you stay at my house. We can walk around old Vladikavkaz, the Prospect Mira, there is a wonderful park here. If you want to stay near the mountains I`d advise you to start meeting with our picturesque republic from Kurtatinsky gorge. The way from

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will take 30 minutes. I recommend you to stay in the “FOREST”, it is

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modern hotel with an amazing mountain view. From

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hotel

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you can go to the Dargavs,

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dead

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. Have you remembered I sent you photos when we were there with Kate,

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summer?

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the way, you can stop by the Dolina

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restaurant, for my mind, there is the most delicious Caucasian food. You can

also

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camping with

Mihoshka

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Mishka

. He is the best guide in these places ( I`ll send you his Instagram page)and knows fantastic places high up in the mountains. On

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top of that, he is

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photographer, so, you`ll have wonderful photos. Make sure to pack some warm clothes. It can be chilly at night. If your want some others ideas just let me know. I`ll be glad to help you out.

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The Closing

The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.

Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.

Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)

Yours faithfully,

Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)

Yours sincerely,

Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)

Best regards,
Warm wishes,

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6 paragraphs

233 words

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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The Closing

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