Some people think job satisfaction is more important than job security. But others believe that people cannot always enjoy their jobs and having a permanent job is more important. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Choosing a

job

in

this

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competitive

era is difficult

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say the least. While some

people

are promoting the idea that being satisfied

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a

job

is quite critical to

have

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a good life, others consider being

secured

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is far more important. I am convinced that

job

satisfaction is vital and

people

can not survive in an occupation that they do not like. Those who advocate the importance of

job

satisfaction indicate valuable points.

First

of all, the proportion of time

that is

being spent on working is considerable and the way of spending

this

time can not be underestimated. They often take the example of well-known occupations like medicine that should dedicate not only day hours but

also

nights to be at

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workplaces

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.

Consequently

, if they do not enjoy it, in

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they are living a life that they do not want and eventually they might drop out due to

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pressure.

Besides

that, disliking a career

result

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results

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in not doing the best for executing a

job

, which results in failures. So even the

people

who have permanent

jobs

are in danger of losing them because they are susceptible to

make

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mistakes.

For example

, doctors who do not enjoy providing care might be accused

by

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of

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negligence and lose their

leicense

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license

licence

. Despite the above, being hired in a permanent position has always been viewed as a passport to a secure life. The reason for permanent employees feeling more relieved about their future is the dramatic developments that have been happening in the world.

For instance

, robots are substituting positions of humans in many companies. To exemplify

further

, an uber driver might feel satisfied with their

jobs

' flexibility and income, but

driveless

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driverless

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vehicles are about to substitute them.

Therefore

,

people

believe for surviving in

this

developing era, having a permanent

job

is vital. To sum up, one can say being satisfied

by

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jobs

are critical in choosing a

job

.

However

, based on the unprecedented future having a secured position is important either. I would say that the former

one

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plays

far

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more important role because without it even the permanent workers might lose their

jobs

.