Some people think that all university students should study what they like. Others believe that they should only be allowed to study subjects that will be useful in the future, such as those related to science and technology, discuss both these views and give your opinion

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that are being offered at universities get

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public attention these days. While some

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are promoting

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idea that studying in fields that a student likes is quite critical, others consider offering limited useful

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far more important for the future. I am convinced that pursuing one's interest is

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a better future. Those who advocate providing various

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that include different

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's interests indicate valuable points. They often take the example of topics like arts and

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music

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which might not be as essential as science and technology for a

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but have brought a lot of delight and fame

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a

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and not only brought fame

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remunerative. Added to

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is the personal aspect which is the joy of working in

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favourite field, enjoying all moments of doing that, and having a better performance that can result in a lot of accomplishments. Despite the above,

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like science and technology have always been viewed as essential topics that countries need to develop. The reason for these topics being more important is the

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variety

of related jobs to these areas that a

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is running with.

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, for a

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to improve, it should have a powerful healthcare system and educated

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engineers

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, computerization of the fundamentals of industries requires professional IT graduates who know how to work with new technologies.

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,

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believe that for a

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to improve and subsequent improvement of its residents, universities should educate students to run the essential occupations of the

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. To sum up, one can say that studying in a desirable field and having access to those

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are

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critical for

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and countries.

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, if step back and look at a

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, it is far more important to

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fill the essential positions

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well-educated

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. I would say that those fundamental

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are vital for countries to survive in

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competitive era.