Some people believe that reading stories from a book is better than watching TV or playing a computer games for children. Do you agree or disagree?
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children
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games
than reading Use synonyms
stories
. So I believe that reading Use synonyms
stories
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games
and watching Use synonyms
TV
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skills and change their Correct word choice
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characters
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of all, there is no doubt that I agree with Linking Words
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stories
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TV
programs and Use synonyms
computer
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games
for Use synonyms
children
's attention, imagination and vocabulary. By reading Use synonyms
stories
, Use synonyms
children
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to develop imagination because they imagine the Correct your spelling
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characters
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stories
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children
to develop their language and learn pronunciation and vocabulary. So I believe by reading Use synonyms
stories
, Use synonyms
children
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abilities
developing
.
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people said that books are an important part of their life. By reading Replace the word
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children
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also
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be
addicted to technology and waste their time.
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children
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their eyes and body. So I believe that by reading Change preposition
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relax
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games
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watching animations or cartoons.
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