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Individuals can do nothing to protect the environment, and only governments and big companies can make a difference. Do you agree of disagree?

#individuals #environment #governments #companies #difference
It is always a debatable topic
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who is
resposible
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responsible
 to protect the
environment
, people or
governments
 and massive firms. I agree with the notion that
governments
 and huge
companies
 can make a considerable difference to save the atmosphere,
this
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this
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To begin
 with,
governments
 of nations have tremendously large funds in their budget which can help to preserve
environment
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. Because
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proper implementation of environmental protection
project
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 needs a
lot
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 money,
governments
 with
planned
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budget
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 may be viable
option
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 to achieve desired environmental goals.
In addition
, they may formulate strict policies and rules to be followed by people.
For example
, planting more
tree
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 and fine
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chopping
a tree policies
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 can be helpful to lower
down
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deforestation effects. From the side of big
companies
, it may be a great step to protect
environment
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 if big
companies
 adopt and accept their social responsibilities timely. To illustrate, an article published in The Guardian newspaper by its
editior
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editor
-in-chief,
Ms.
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 Katharine Viner, in March
,
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 2015 that when big
companies
 worked on the standards of pollution
emmissions
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emissions
, it had helped a lot in the
environment
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 protection process.
In addition
, big
companies
 have immeasurable ways and funds to replace the faulty infrastructure with the up-to-date efficient
techonology
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technology
 as
this
techonological
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technological
 change can assist in declining the wastage of natural resources or a chance to recycle waste
product
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 in many ways.
Hence
, big
companies
 by taking these measures can give a
certainity
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certainty
 to the
protect
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 of
environment
 more than the
efforst
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effort
efforts
 from individuals. To encapsulate, it is unequivocal that big
companies
 and
governments
 can be more effective than individuals to protect the
environment
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 after considering above mentioned points.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • environmental awareness
  • sustainable practices
  • renewable energy
  • carbon footprint
  • waste reduction
  • conservation
  • ecosystem
  • pollution
  • climate change
  • responsibility
  • leadership
  • legislation
  • investment
  • collaboration
  • systemic change
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