Traffic congestion is becoming problomatic inmajor cities what solutions can be suggest to help to solve the problem

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prevelance

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prevalence

of

traffic

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congestion

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in major cities, there are not many

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polices

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or ideas

are

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implemented or suggested to solve it. In my opinion,

method

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should be implemented in 3 fields at the same time, which are law,

transportation

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, and education, and each of them

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on

the

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illegal parking, poor development of

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MTR

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the MTR

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system

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, and

heat wave

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in buying private vehicles respectively. In terms of law,

increasing

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an increasing

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penalty

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the penalty

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of

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parking

cars

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in incorrect places helps

solving

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traffic

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jam

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. By observing the

street

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, we can see lots of private

cars

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are parked along the

street

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illegally.

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to the law,

cars

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cannot park on

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the street

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street

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streets

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which

are

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labelled with double yellow

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.

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, not

losts

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lots

of citizens follow

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rule.

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, lots of

cars

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are parked illegally and blocked the

road

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. Hardly can other transportations pass through the railway when it is extremely crowded.

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,

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are

stucked

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stuck

stacked

together and results in

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traffic

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a traffic

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jam

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problem, we should

increases

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the

penalty

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of

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parking illegally. Nowadays, the

penalty

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of

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leaving

cars

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on

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street

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that should not be parked is only $5000. It is a low price

to

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some residents in major cities.

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, we should

increases

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the

penalty

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to at least $10000 to

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them to prevent

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phenomenon. In long term,

traffic

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congestion

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can be solved.

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, upgrading and redeveloping the

transportation

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system

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reduces the

amount

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of

cars

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on

main

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street

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to solve

traffic

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congestion

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. Lacking

of

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MTR

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lines, lots of people may choose

taking

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buses or even

taxies

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taxis

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as it is more convenient to travel

worldwidely

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worldwide

. Meanwhile, the

envirronemnt

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environment

of

undergorund

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underground

lines is worst. Without

a

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well

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management

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, there are full of rubbish which triggers the poor hygiene.

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, the

MTR

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is narrow. If we were the citizens, we would not want to enter

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a crowded and dirty places

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a crowded and dirty place

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. So, all citizens choose other

transportation

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rather than

MTR

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and

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to

trraffic

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traffic

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jam

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. In order to solve

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, the underground transport

system

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should be redeveloped. More

line

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should be built,

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as Hong Kong, they have built a brand new 'Tun Ma' line for locals to travel more easily to different places.

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, the design of the

MTR

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should be

imporved

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improved

,

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as

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enlarging the

inner-size

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inner size

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of it and ensuring there is a ventilator to maintain good air quality.

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, the result of

MTR

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are

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chosen by the public

attributes

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to

a decreases

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a decrease

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in on-ground vehicles which

solve

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traffiic

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traffic

congestion

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.

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but not least, educating youths

of

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taking more public

transportation

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reduce

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the number of private

cars

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on roads and ease the

traffic

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probelm

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problem

problems

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century, the number of vehicles on

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road

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booms as people are richer than before. Being worthy, they achieve better living quality by buying their own car. Yet, the main roads were settled in the past and they are not expected to 'carry'

million

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of

cars

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at the same time. The load is exceeded. To solve

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, we should start from the root, which is education. Educating the kids

of

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not buying private carrs is essential. Knowledge of the benefits of taking public

transportation

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,

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as saving money, reducing the release of carbon dioxide, and improving the air quality

are

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taught. So, after understanding the benefits of public

transportation

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, private

cars

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are replaced and

number

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the number

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of

cars

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on

road

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reduces. In conclusion, increasing

penalty

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to

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for

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illegal parking, improving the

transportation

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system

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, and educating the goods of public transport are the ways to reduce

cars

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on

road

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to solve

traffic

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jam

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