Traffic congestion is becoming problomatic inmajor cities what solutions can be suggest to help to solve the problem

Despite the

prevelance

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prevalence

of

traffic

congestion

in major cities, there are not many

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polices

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policies

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or ideas

are

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implemented or suggested to solve it. In my opinion,

method

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should be implemented in 3 fields at the same time, which are law,

transportation

, and education, and each of them

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on

the

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illegal parking, poor development of

MTR

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the MTR

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system

, and

heat wave

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in buying private vehicles respectively. In terms of law,

increasing

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an increasing

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penalty

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the penalty

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of

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parking

cars

in incorrect places helps

solving

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traffic

jam

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. By observing the

street

, we can see lots of private

cars

are parked along the

street

illegally.

Accordingly

to the law,

cars

cannot park on

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the street

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street

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streets

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which

are

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labelled with double yellow

line

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.

However

, not

losts

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lots

of citizens follow

this

rule.

Accordingly

, lots of

cars

are parked illegally and blocked the

road

. Hardly can other transportations pass through the railway when it is extremely crowded.

Hence

,

cars

are

stucked

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stuck

stacked

together and results in

traffic

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a traffic

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jam

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. To solve

this

problem, we should

increases

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the

penalty

of

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parking illegally. Nowadays, the

penalty

of

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leaving

cars

on

street

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the street

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that should not be parked is only $5000. It is a low price

to

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some residents in major cities.

Thus

, we should

increases

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the

penalty

to at least $10000 to

frightened

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them to prevent

this

phenomenon. In long term,

traffic

congestion

can be solved.

On the other hand

, upgrading and redeveloping the

transportation

system

reduces the

amount

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of

cars

on

main

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street

to solve

traffic

congestion

. Lacking

of

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MTR

lines, lots of people may choose

taking

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buses or even

taxies

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taxis

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as it is more convenient to travel

worldwidely

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worldwide

. Meanwhile, the

envirronemnt

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environment

of

undergorund

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underground

lines is worst. Without

a

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well

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management

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, there are full of rubbish which triggers the poor hygiene.

Also

, the

MTR

is narrow. If we were the citizens, we would not want to enter

such

a crowded and dirty places

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a crowded and dirty place

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. So, all citizens choose other

transportation

rather than

MTR

and

leads

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to

trraffic

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traffic

jam

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. In order to solve

this

, the underground transport

system

should be redeveloped. More

line

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should be built,

such

as Hong Kong, they have built a brand new 'Tun Ma' line for locals to travel more easily to different places.

Also

, the design of the

MTR

should be

imporved

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improved

,

such

as

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enlarging the

inner-size

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inner size

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of it and ensuring there is a ventilator to maintain good air quality.

Consequently

, the result of

MTR

are

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chosen by the public

attributes

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to

a decreases

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a decrease

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in on-ground vehicles which

solve

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traffiic

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traffic

congestion

.

Last

but not least, educating youths

of

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taking more public

transportation

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to reduce

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reduce

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the number of private

cars

on roads and ease the

traffic

probelm

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problem

problems

. In

21th

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century, the number of vehicles on

road

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the road

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booms as people are richer than before. Being worthy, they achieve better living quality by buying their own car. Yet, the main roads were settled in the past and they are not expected to 'carry'

million

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of

cars

at the same time. The load is exceeded. To solve

this

, we should start from the root, which is education. Educating the kids

of

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not buying private carrs is essential. Knowledge of the benefits of taking public

transportation

,

such

as saving money, reducing the release of carbon dioxide, and improving the air quality

are

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taught. So, after understanding the benefits of public

transportation

, private

cars

are replaced and

number

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the number

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of

cars

on

road

reduces. In conclusion, increasing

penalty

to

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for

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illegal parking, improving the

transportation

system

, and educating the goods of public transport are the ways to reduce

cars

on

road

to solve

traffic

jam

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.