More and more students choose to move to other countries to study their higher education. Do you think the advantages of this outweigh its disadvantages?

It is true, that most students nowadays prefer to
study
abroad in order to get
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Bachelor's
or Master's degree.
People
argue and dispute about
this
topic, whether they must
study
in their
country
or in
foreign
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country
? On the one hand, studying abroad
defenitely
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definitely
benefits and allows
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students a lot of opportunities.
For instance
, they become familiar with foreign culture, history, lifestyle, learn their language easily, which helps them to broaden their mind and to become well- known person.
Moreover
, doors of universities from all over the world are open for learners,
also
they
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offer entrances to a
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vide
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range of
study
fields. These opportunities
attracts
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applicants from overseas and they move to another
country
.
On the other hand
, it is really surprising to choose
study
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in another
country
, when there
many
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universities, colleges or institutions in
motherland
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.
Drawbacks
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of studying abroad
is
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high.
For example
, the contract of foreign universities, cost of
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accommodation
and other living needs are expensive, to get
diploma
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really
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difficult and it is another problem.
Nevertheless
, with
this
diploma students with a huge forecast cannot apply for a job in their
country
. To pay for them they have to work in their free time
instead
of studying their subject and it leads to
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of knowledge but spending money. Parents have to support with money their son or daughter. To conclude, I realize that studying in another continent or neighbour
country
has more plus than
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,
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because I believe, that
people
who
study
abroad have a chance to increase not only love for their motherland, in spite of the fact that they miss
people
, way of living in their hometown, but
also
they respect
people
from overseas.
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