More and more students choose to move to other countries to study their higher education. Do you think the advantages of this outweigh its disadvantages?
It is true, that most students nowadays prefer to
study
abroad in order to get Bachalor's
or Master's degree. Correct your spelling
Bachelor's
People
argue and dispute about this
topic, whether they must study
in their country
or in foreign
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a foreign
country
?
On the one hand, studying abroad defenitely
benefits and allows Correct your spelling
definitely
for
students a lot of opportunities. Change preposition
apply
For instance
, they become familiar with foreign culture, history, lifestyle, learn their language easily, which helps them to broaden their mind and to become well- known person. Moreover
, doors of universities from all over the world are open for learners, also
they
offer entrances to a Correct pronoun usage
apply
Correct your spelling
wide
vide
range of Correct your spelling
wide
study
fields. These opportunities attracts
applicants from overseas and they move to another Change the verb form
attract
country
.
On the other hand
, it is really surprising to choose study
in another Fix the infinitive
to study
country
, when there many
universities, colleges or institutions in Add a missing verb
are many
motherland
. Add an article
the motherland
Drawbacks
of studying abroad Correct article usage
The drawbacks
is
high. Change the verb form
are
For example
, the contract of foreign universities, cost of accomodation
and other living needs are expensive, to get Correct your spelling
accommodation
diploma
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a diploma
really
difficult and it is another problem. Add a missing verb
is really
Nevertheless
, with this
diploma students with a huge forecast cannot apply for a job in their country
. To pay for them they have to work in their free time instead
of studying their subject and it leads to lack
of knowledge but spending money. Parents have to support with money their son or daughter.
To conclude, I realize that studying in another continent or neighbour Correct article usage
a lack
country
has more plus than minus
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a minus
,
because I believe, that Remove the comma
apply
people
who study
abroad have a chance to increase not only love for their motherland, in spite of the fact that they miss people
, way of living in their hometown, but also
they respect people
from overseas.Submitted by khushnudrustamovich on
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