Machines are replacing humans in the manual workforce. Do you think the positive effects outweigh the negative effects?

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industiral

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evolutions, the

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releasing their labour by the replacement in many kinds of

tasks

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some

drawback

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when

machines

replace

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in many

jobs

,

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believe the benefits

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cited negative effect of

machines

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work is the scare of unemployment. It is true that

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machines

can do many hard

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smoothly

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a lower cost and response. As the cost of

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now more affordable, many companies have replaced their

humans

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workforce

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inovative

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innovative

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the aim of higher profits. As result, many workers

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unemployment

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, many candy companies replaced their

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labour

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machines

in many

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of

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manufacturer

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processes which caused a

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number

of

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worker

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losing

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jobs

.

However

,

machines

have many positive contributions which can compensate for the drawback.

Firstly

,

Machines

are more efficient and durable. In many

tasks

of work,

machines

can do faster and more accurately than

humans

,

moreover

,

machines

can operate continuously days and nights while workers need time for refreshment.

As a result

,

machines

can create more value and higher productivity.

For example

, a packaging system can make one thousand products an hour while

people

handling

this

task will need two labours doing in eight hours.

Secondly

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the machine

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machine

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can help

people

in

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dangerous

tasks

. There are

such

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jobs

which may put

humans

at

risks

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if doing them due the

circumtance

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circumstance

is not convenient for

people

.

However

,

machines

can undertake these

tasks

well without any

harms

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instance

, in the rescue of victims of fires, robots can

be use

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to enter the

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fired and smoked building to grab the

people

out.  In conclusion, despite there

are

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some drawbacks,

machines

have more significant benefits which can help to increase productivity and replace

humans

in many dangerous

jobs

.