Computers are being used more and more in education. Some people believe that learning online is a better way to learn than attending a class with a teacher. To extent do you agree or disagree

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Since technology develops faster and more powerful, many
students
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and educators use the Internet to
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the extent
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extent
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the possibility of different
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instead
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of teaching in real classrooms. I generally disagree that traditional education is inferior
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online
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. It could be argued that online
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can be used in various ways and across the boundaries of different countries. Regardless, taking lessons on the net is not an effective way
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everyone,
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has many limitations.
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, numerous undeveloped or developing countries do not have
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network
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so they do not enjoy the same quality as developed countries.
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,
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half of online
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are recorded previously, people may not have interactions if they want to inquire questions.
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, some supporters claim that online
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can be applied in
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way, especially during the pandemic period, or leave the questions in
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comment
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.
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,
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not only need more than experts’ knowledge but
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have problems in their reality. Teachers’ experiences can assist
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textbooks’
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questions and the issues which
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suffered before.
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,
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can interact with their peers in classrooms,
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can help them to increase
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ability
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. In conclusion, education can be transformed into many ways to educate people who are not available to be in classrooms. In spite
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, traditional teaching method still can not be replaced in
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not have
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function as joining the relationship
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and teachers.
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