You recently organized an all-day meeting for your company, which took place in a local hotel. In their feedback, participants at the meeting said they liked the hotel, but they were unhappy about the food served for lunch. Write a letter to the manager of the hotel. In your letter • Say what the participant liked about the hotel. • Explain why they were unhappy about the hotel. • Suggest what the manager should do to improve the food in the future.

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Dear Sir or Madam, I am Raquel Prudente from WTW company and I recently organized an event at your hotel on April 1st. I am writing to give you feedback that I have received from my coworkers. The participants really appreciated the arrangements of the seats, they were
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extremely comfortable, and the size of the screen was excellent allowing even the
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line of seats to see everything perfectly.
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, the restrooms were tidy and the air conditioning worked perfectly letting the place in a pleasant temperature.
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, almost all the guests were unhappy about the food served during the meeting. There was no option for vegetarian people, and the salad seemed to not be fresh.
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, the quality of the beverages was terrible, the juice tasted artificial and the coffee was almost cold. I would like to suggest that you include food options for vegetarians on the main menu, the juice should be made from fruits.
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, it is crucial that the coffee served is hot, cold options can be extra if you want to please your customers. I wish you a good day and hope that you will consider my suggestions. Yours faithfully, Raquel Prudente.
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