In some countries young people are encouraged to work or travel for a year between finishing school and starting university studies. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages for young people who decide to do this.

More and more youngsters choose to break a year before

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to

university

in several countries. I think it's a great choice though there might be some potential problems for them. Young people are able to enrich their life by entering the workforce or

traveling

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. With the experiences

whatever

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from job or tourism, they could expand their horizons and get improved in social skills.

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, those who just

graduate

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from high

shcool

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school

know a little about society at

first

but if they obtained an opportunity as an intern in a company, they would learn how to cooperate and communicate with others. Those who are going to travel are beneficial from

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culture

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or various knowledge inaccessible from books. These experiences are relatively valuable which they can't experience during their school

time

. Meanwhile, it's a good

time

for them to have a rest and

then

they can start

university

study with better efficiency. As the preparation for the

university

entrance examination is kind of hard, young students are exhausted or

worsely

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worse

sick of

study

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. The greatest suggestion is an escape from school for a while and that do what they love.

Traveling

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always could be the best choice to relax oneself, no matter physically or psychologically. Achieving the dream

to

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some places is definitely exciting and

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you to move forward firmly.

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, a favourite job is

anothor

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another

excellent option, as you do enjoy it so that forget the pain from exams. After refreshing themselves, it's no doubt that they could behave better during

university

.

Nonetheless

, it's

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adverse choice for young people because they are disoriented, resulting in wasting

time

. Most of the young lack specialised techniques and knowledge, so they are likely to

apply

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physical jobs. These jobs are meaningless for their development in life. Young people may do something like moving bricks or

wahsing

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washing

dishes in a restaurant, which is a waste of

time

even if they get well paid. I reckon that the advantages of gapping a year for work or

traveling

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overwhelm its disadvantages as long as young men figure their needs out during the year.