Some people say that playing games can be bad for children. Others say that playing computer games can have positive effects on the way children develop. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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some individuals believe that video games are devastating for children's improvement,the opponents are of the notion that it is beneficial for them.

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in my point of view,its positive footprints surpass in multitudes aspects,different sides are uttered here. One of the most highlighted advantages has to do with its impression on users' knowledge.To enlighten,not only enhances

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capability in utilising technology as the current affair but their lingual information would be fortified

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they have to interact with others with divergent tongues from different nations.

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,both the awareness of technology usage and

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knowing various languages would be beneficial for their subsequent personal and social lives, grasping a job vacancy

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will be saved from the hazards that are awaiting them in society.As a vivid case,neither kidnappers nor drug sellers have the capacity to abuse them if they are entertained with their computers at home.

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owing to the sedentary lifestyle that these smart boxes bestow

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folks.To illustrate,Either:the risk of obesity or eyesight problems has swelled among people,who

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the majority of their time in front of screens.To explain,

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research,humans' eyes are sensitive to the light of screens.

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,ignoring the activities that used to be more conventional,like cycling,can have some detrimental effects on the mental and the physical realms.

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a fact,the balance of body hormones stems from people's function during their lives,which would not be set properly if individuals deprive themselves of physical activities.

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,an inappropriate development may occur in their brain and muscles.

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some undeniable drawbacks would be experienced by the young,who are attracted by computer games,namely:visual problems or obesity,to me its affirmative sides,

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as enhancing adolescents' knowledge about other languages and as well technology utilization, outweigh drastically.

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,its related side effects could be eradicated by restricting the hour of playing game by children.