Traffic congestion is becoming more and more common in urban areas. What are the causes? What solutions can be adopted to solve this problem?

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traffic
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playes
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plays
played
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one
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of the main roles in our life. In my opinion, there are
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causes
for
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traffic
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congestion. At
first
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, the poor condition and lack of public transport
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one
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of the
most
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biggest causes of
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congestion. Because of that most
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people
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use their own private cars in order to go everywhere they want
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of using
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public transport.
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, the concentration of population to the
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from
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is becoming an another biggest
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. Nowadays, many
people
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shifted to the
city
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from the
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in order to get
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a job
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job
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, better education and build
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better modern
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lifestyle
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life style
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.
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, by
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an increasing
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number of
people
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and personal cars in the
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.
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number
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of measures
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can be taken to tackle these problems.
One
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soluation
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solution
could be that
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should increase the taxes on private cars and use the money for improving public transport services.
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, the
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should more concentrate on
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the movement
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of the
people
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and take some measures to restrict moving from the
countryside
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to the
city
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.
One
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of the measures which can be taken by the
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is
develop
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countryside
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the countryside
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and improve living, working and studying conditions in
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countryside
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the countryside
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. In conclusion, even
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traffic
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though traffic
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congestion is becoming more common in urban
ares
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areas
, the
government
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can tackle
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issue in
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time.
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