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Some countries have people living more years. The life expectancy has increased in some countries and what are the possible effects of this on individual and on society.

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In certain countries, people are having a long life due to which the life expectancy
also
 rose.
This
 can impact the individual by making them prone to illness whereas, on the society by depletion of the
resources
 due to maximum utilization of it. On the one hand, when a person reaches their elderly they gradually start losing their physiology in the body which makes them at risk of getting sick. They are highly prone to getting bone fractures because of depletion in bone density due to ageing and the more they live the higher the chances of becoming bedridden. To cite an example, the majority of the aged population get illnesses
such
 as bone problems, gastrointestinal problems, poor eyesight causing a risk of falls and so on.
On the other hand
, when the life expectancy increases the population of the country
also
 rises; leading to the overuse of available
resources
. When
this
 gets on continuing it can lead to a decrease of those
resources
such
 as forests, timber and an increase in pollution too.And lacking those directly hampers the society. For example; overpopulation has compelled people to deforestation which makes them at risk of natural calamities. In conclusion, some countries' citizens are living longer and
this
 has caused
its
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 direct effect on their health.
Also
,
this
 has increased the consumption of surrounding
resources
 causing problems in society.
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