Last month you had a holiday overseas where you stayed with some friends. They have just sent you some holiday photos. Write a letter to your friends. In your letter: thank them for the holiday and the photos explain why you didn’t write earlier invite them to come and stay with you

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Dear Sushi and Raman, How have you been? I hope

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letter finds you well. I've just received an envelope containing all the pictures of our holidays and I absolutely fell in love with them. They took me back to our vacation time in Australia.

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of all, I wanted to thank you for all the photos as well as for providing me with great hospitality in your home. I had a wonderful stay with both of you and couldn't ask more. I really loved all the scenic adventures including beaches and hill stations, particularly the live city called Sydney where we enjoyed the live performance of Swift Taylor.

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, I wanted to apologise for not writing before.

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I wanted to but couldn't because as soon as I landed here back in India, my mother fell sick. Since

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we've been running around looking after her.

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, the good news is that she is recovering pretty well and will be fine very soon.

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month, we will be celebrating our anniversary. I'd be delighted if you could come over and stay with us.

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, you'll

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get a chance to meet my family and see a bit of India, especially its rich culture. I hope you could make it. Take care and hope to see you soon. Your friend, Gurpreet

Submitted by gurpreetmann1994 on Wed Apr 20 2022

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

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Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

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8 paragraphs

221 words

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Last month you had a holiday overseas where you stayed with some friends. They have just sent you some holiday photos. Write a letter to your friends. In your letter: thank them for the holiday and the photos explain why you didn’t write earlier invite them to come and stay with you

Some people believe that unpaid community service should be a compulsory part of high school programs ( for example, working for a charity , improving the neighbourhood or teaching sports to younger children. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In their advertising, businesses nowadays usually emphasise that their products are new in some way. Why is yhis? Do you think it is a positive or negative development.

Some people believe that the best way to improve the quality of healthcare in a country is to train and hire more doctors and nurses. Do you agree or disagree?

Many manufactured food and drink products contain high level of sugars which causes many health problems. Sugary products should be made more expensive to encourage people to consume less sugar. Do you agree or disagree?

It is common aspiration among many young peopleto run their own business, rather than work for an employer. Do you think the advantages of working for yourself outweigh the drawbacks?