Last month you had a holiday overseas where you stayed with some friends. They have just sent you some holiday photos. Write a letter to your friends. In your letter: thank them for the holiday and the photos explain why you didn’t write earlier invite them to come and stay with you

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Dear Sushi and Raman, How have you been? I hope

this

letter finds you well. I've just received an envelope containing all the pictures of our holidays and I absolutely fell in love with them. They took me back to our vacation time in Australia.

First

of all, I wanted to thank you for all the photos as well as for providing me with great hospitality in your home. I had a wonderful stay with both of you and couldn't ask more. I really loved all the scenic adventures including beaches and hill stations, particularly the live city called Sydney where we enjoyed the live performance of Swift Taylor.

Secondly

, I wanted to apologise for not writing before.

Although

I wanted to but couldn't because as soon as I landed here back in India, my mother fell sick. Since

then

we've been running around looking after her.

However

, the good news is that she is recovering pretty well and will be fine very soon.

month, we will be celebrating our anniversary. I'd be delighted if you could come over and stay with us.

Besides

, you'll

also

get a chance to meet my family and see a bit of India, especially its rich culture. I hope you could make it. Take care and hope to see you soon. Your friend, Gurpreet

Submitted by gurpreetmann1994 on Wed Apr 20 2022

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

221 words

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