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Some people say that computers have made life easier and more convenient. Others say that computers have made life more complex and stressful. What is your opinion? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

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Computers have made life easier and more convenient as it speeds up any process or job. When a person lost his identification card
instead
 of searching for it manually which took forever to find the correct files it now becomes easier with the computer as you just punch incorrect the correct information and get results in minutes. On the other ,hand computers have made life more complex and stressful as more people are losing their jobs. A job previously done by three or more people is now being done by one person. After losing their jobs people become stressed as they will try to hustle to put food on the table.
Also
 one needs to be computer literate to understand them. If you are computer illiterate the whole thing will be stressful and complicated as you will have to rely on someone else. Business-wise it's advisable to use computers are they are fast and information ready but need someone who is good at them as you can be easily duped or scammed.
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