There is a public park near where you live. You have heard that the local council wants to sell this park. Write a letter to a local newspaper in your letter : introduce yourself, describe the importance of the park, say what action you will take if the council continues with the plan.

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Dear sir/madame I proposed

this

letter to inform you

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event which is going to happen in our local area. I am

farid

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Farid

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and writing to you from Mahdasht city, Alborz province. Recently, I have realized from local council officials accidentally that they had decided to sell

public

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park near us called Hamoon at auction to build a large commercial and administrative building due to

financial

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crisis. I was really impressed by hearing that because

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, there are many alive and green trees or plants that apart from their benefits for the local weather and scene of the place, must be transferred precisely in order to not be damaged or died since their

color

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will go yellow even by a slight mistake in movement.

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, due to

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of historical buildings behind the park, building heights in

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area must be as per rules and

regulation

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not to cover

scenery

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the scenery

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of those ancient spots. Despite several announcements to city authorities ,nobody takes care

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I state now if

this

plan is not changed or postponed in the

few

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, I will follow international laws and send an appeal to United Nations Educational,Scientific, Cultural

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(UNESCO) to investigate

this

urgent issue directly. I hope

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spring into an action to investigate similar critics too and preserve our environment and historical values more. I am looking forward to hearing from you. Yours faithfully

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5Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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7 paragraphs

235 words

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Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

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Clear and correct grammar

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There is a public park near where you live. You have heard that the local council wants to sell this park. Write a letter to a local newspaper in your letter : introduce yourself, describe the importance of the park, say what action you will take if the council continues with the plan.

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The internet allows us to dtay connected eith each other no matter where we are.On the other hand,it also isolates us and encorages people not to socialize. To what extent do you agree or disagree with these statements?

Some people think that a sense of competition in children shoul be encouraged. Others believe that children who are taught to co-operate rather than compete become more useful adultsz. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

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