There is a public park near where you live. You have heard that the local council wants to sell this park. Write a letter to a local newspaper in your letter : introduce yourself, describe the importance of the park, say what action you will take if the council continues with the plan.

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Dear sir/madame I proposed

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letter to inform you

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event which is going to happen in our local area. I am

farid

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Farid

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and writing to you from Mahdasht city, Alborz province. Recently, I have realized from local council officials accidentally that they had decided to sell

public

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park near us called Hamoon at auction to build a large commercial and administrative building due to

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crisis. I was really impressed by hearing that because

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, there are many alive and green trees or plants that apart from their benefits for the local weather and scene of the place, must be transferred precisely in order to not be damaged or died since their

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will go yellow even by a slight mistake in movement.

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, due to

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of historical buildings behind the park, building heights in

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area must be as per rules and

regulation

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not to cover

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the scenery

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of those ancient spots. Despite several announcements to city authorities ,nobody takes care

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I state now if

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plan is not changed or postponed in the

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few

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, I will follow international laws and send an appeal to United Nations Educational,Scientific, Cultural

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(UNESCO) to investigate

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urgent issue directly. I hope

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letter would be

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spring into an action to investigate similar critics too and preserve our environment and historical values more. I am looking forward to hearing from you. Yours faithfully

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

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Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

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235 words

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There is a public park near where you live. You have heard that the local council wants to sell this park. Write a letter to a local newspaper in your letter : introduce yourself, describe the importance of the park, say what action you will take if the council continues with the plan.

The most important aim of science shold be to improve people's lives.

Increasing the price of petrol is the best way to solve growing traffic and poluttion problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree? What other measures fdo you think might be effective?

Some people think it is a good idea to socialise with work colleagues during evenings and weekends. Other people think it is important to keep working life completely separate from social life. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

The average standard of people's health is likely to be lower in the future than it is now. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

There are many people today who are overweight and unhealthy. Give reasons for this and give possible solutions to fix these problems.