There is a public park near where you live. You have heard that the local council wants to sell this park. Write a letter to a local newspaper in your letter : introduce yourself, describe the importance of the park, say what action you will take if the council continues with the plan.

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Dear sir/madame I proposed

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letter to inform you

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event which is going to happen in our local area. I am

farid

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Farid

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and writing to you from Mahdasht city, Alborz province. Recently, I have realized from local council officials accidentally that they had decided to sell

public

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park near us called Hamoon at auction to build a large commercial and administrative building due to

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crisis. I was really impressed by hearing that because

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, there are many alive and green trees or plants that apart from their benefits for the local weather and scene of the place, must be transferred precisely in order to not be damaged or died since their

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will go yellow even by a slight mistake in movement.

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, due to

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of historical buildings behind the park, building heights in

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area must be as per rules and

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not to cover

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the scenery

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of those ancient spots. Despite several announcements to city authorities ,nobody takes care

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I state now if

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plan is not changed or postponed in the

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few

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, I will follow international laws and send an appeal to United Nations Educational,Scientific, Cultural

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(UNESCO) to investigate

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urgent issue directly. I hope

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letter would be

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spring into an action to investigate similar critics too and preserve our environment and historical values more. I am looking forward to hearing from you. Yours faithfully

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

235 words

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