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As a part of their education, many students work at a company for a short period of time without a salary. Are there more advantages than disadvantages to this?

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Some
students
 are asked to
work
 at the place they do their internship without paying because
this
 is part of the academic education plan.
Although
students
 face
difficult
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time
 working for a period of
time
withou
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without
 earning money, I believe there are more advantages because
this
 is an outstanding opportunity of getting
experience
on
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in
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 the field they are going to get a
licensed
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. Facing the world without getting money is a difficult
time
 to deal
for
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 many pupils when they are completing their educational programs. Every day has many expenses to cover and bills to pay to understand to accept
work
 without earning a salary. More importantly, many young adults have a debt that needs to be
payevery
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pay every
 month and
this
 increases
the
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 stress
on
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in
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 life. To explain
further
, in The United States,
students
 can attend University education by getting into an
inmmense
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immense
 debt;
however
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this
 gave them the opportunity to obtain
an
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third
 education.
As a result
, more
then
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than
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 eighty
percent
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 of the young population is in debt.
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Nevertheless
, I believe is worthy to
work
 at a company for a brief period of
time
 without
obtain
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 a salary to accumulate
experience
. Nowadays, if you want to be hired, you must
to
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apply
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prove you have your license and have
experience
 as well when you are applying for a job. Keeping
practicing
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practising
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 at the place you gave your internship is an awesome way to prove
them
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to them
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 you have enough
experience
 when you apply
fo
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for
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 the company. On top of
this
, you will not be considered
as
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an
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untrained
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an untrained
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 person because most of the staff will recognize you as part of the team. To support my idea, when I stay at the hospital in Anaheim without getting
pay
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, I
acquiered
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acquired
 a great
experience
inthe
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in the
 ER department.
Hence
, I accumulate great skills
on
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in
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 many procedures that by the
time
 I apply for
this
 position, it was
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easier
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easer
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easier
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 to get the job. I strongly
belief
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believe
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 that college
students
 need to
work
 an extra mile to assure their spot for the job they want to pursue. What is more important, the company is
provinding
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providing
 the opportunity to practice and
this
lead
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 to
get
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 a suitable position.
Although
 many
students
 do not support
to
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apply
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work
 without a salary, one must consider that the competency is high and most
of
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apply
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the companies
reuqiered
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require
required
 you to have
experience
on
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in
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 the position you are applying for. For these reasons, the advantages far outnumber the disadvantages.
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