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In spite of the advances made in agriculture, many people around the world still go hungry. Why is this the case? What can be done about this problem?

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In
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 modern age, agriculture is improving progressively, yet most
people
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 are still starving. In
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 essay, I will outline the reasons that cause
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 still
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 hungry despite the advancements, and how to solve the problem. Several conceivable factors are being considered as a cause of
people
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 lacking
food
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. Most progressive technology in agriculture has been invented
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 developed
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 as the US, whereas poor
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 could only obtain
food
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 from traditional methods that take many years to grow crops.
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,
food
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 distribution to all
people
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 at a time could not be able to achieve.
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, poor
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 are likely to have a
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 source of investment in
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 development or education because they always need to spend money to import
food
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 from
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another country
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countries
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. The problem could be solved in various ways. Governments all around the world can play a huge role in providing tools to help
countries
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 that are short of advancements in planting.
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, a watering machine that can work in the setting time, or trucks
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 help
people
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 to contain
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 in a large
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.
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, not only do poor country governments ask for others to help with funds, but they
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 need to educate their
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for
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 the suitably practical means for plants growth. The governments could provide citizens
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 by launching a campaign and gathering professionals to teach. In conclusion, the starvation of some
countries
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 is a controversial topic around the globe.
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, there are some possible methods that could be implemented to help which is the cooperation from other developed counties and citizens themselves.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • inequality
  • distribution
  • access to resources
  • climate change
  • natural disasters
  • political factors
  • economic factors
  • agricultural practices
  • infrastructure
  • transportation
  • population growth
  • education
  • knowledge
  • food waste
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