some people say History is one of most important school subjects other people think that, in today world, subject like science and technology are more important than History discuss both views and give your own opinion

There are lots of arguments based on school subjects.
One
of the most common
one
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is
that
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which subject is the most important
one
. There are two different groups
included
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those who assume that the most important
one
is
history
and those who think
science
and technology are more important.
First
of all, it is a fact that
history
is an important subject during
the
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school
time
.
One
of the advantages of being familiar with
history
is the possible beneficial results that may happen in future.
For example
, when a similar situation happened, our knowledge of
history
would help us do a better job or at least not to do similar mistakes. Another reason is that people who have the same nationality
are basically attach
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to each other by
history
and I think the fact that they have the same
history
or at least the same story to tell is
one
of the reasons for
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a group
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of people becoming a nation.
Although
, having historical information can help you with your future you can't make the assumption that
science
that
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science
and technology are not important. In my opinion, they both have similar results
on
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your future.
World
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is a different place right now so some of the historical solutions wouldn’t work out nowadays so you should have
these knowledges
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this knowledge
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at the same
time
to experience a better life.
On the other hand
, these kinds of
science
especially technology is now a part of people's
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lifestyle
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life style
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lifestyle
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so I believe that everybody in the entire world should be familiar with
and
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them and
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it is known that the best
time
for learning these sorts of
science
is in school
time
. In conclusion, I mentioned both groups with different ideas as much as l know. Overall, I assume that significant improvements will happen when a combination of these two subjects
are
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taught in schools.
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  • crucial
  • comprehend
  • retrospect
  • gain insights
  • reflect on
  • sharpen
  • evaluate
  • significance
  • heritage
  • legacy
  • advent
  • breakthroughs
  • sustain
  • sustainability
  • revolutions
  • empowered
  • overcome
  • transform
  • advancements
  • collaboration
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  • diversity
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