some people say History is one of most important school subjects other people think that, in today world, subject like science and technology are more important than History discuss both views and give your own opinion
There are lots of arguments based on school subjects.
One
of the most common one
is Change to a plural noun
ones
that
which subject is the most important Correct determiner usage
apply
one
. There are two different groups included
those who assume that the most important Wrong verb form
including
one
is history
and those who think science
and technology are more important.
First
of all, it is a fact that history
is an important subject during the
school Correct article usage
apply
time
. One
of the advantages of being familiar with history
is the possible beneficial results that may happen in future. For example
, when a similar situation happened, our knowledge of history
would help us do a better job or at least not to do similar mistakes. Another reason is that people who have the same nationality are basically attach
to each other by Change the verb form
are basically attached
are basically attaching
history
and I think the fact that they have the same history
or at least the same story to tell is one
of the reasons for group
of people becoming a nation.
Add an article
a group
Although
, having historical information can help you with your future you can't make the assumption that science
that
Correct determiner usage
apply
science
and technology are not important. In my opinion, they both have similar results on
your future. Change preposition
for
World
is a different place right now so some of the historical solutions wouldn’t work out nowadays so you should have Add an article
The world
these knowledges
at the same Fix the agreement mistake
this knowledge
time
to experience a better life. On the other hand
, these kinds of science
especially technology is now a part of people's Correct your spelling
lifestyle
life style
so I believe that everybody in the entire world should be familiar with Correct your spelling
lifestyle
and
it is known that the best Correct pronoun usage
them and
time
for learning these sorts of science
is in school time
.
In conclusion, I mentioned both groups with different ideas as much as l know. Overall, I assume that significant improvements will happen when a combination of these two subjects are
taught in schools.Correct subject-verb agreement
is
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