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Some cultures value elderly people more, while other cultures value the youth more. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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Some cultures value elderly
people
 more, while other cultures value the youth more. Discuss
both
 views and give your opinion.  It is  a debatable issue whether most cultures give more priority to young ones or some prefer  older citizens.
Although
 youth plays a crucial role in enhancing the roots of culture , older citizens
also
 have their own
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 of cultural identity. I believe that
both
 concepts have their own importance  and I will discuss
both
 sides in the following paragraphs.  On the one hand, undoubtedly, in
this
 contemporary era, the younger generation
are
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 more creative and
have
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 a lot of knowledge about the latest technology.
In other words
, today's everything
available
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 on the internet, so, young
people
 are well educated and they can easily get information about anything which they find
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difficulty
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regarding
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.  
For example
, thanks to modern technology,  young
people
 can learn about any gadgets like how to use them as well as how to tackle trouble, while,
,
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 any technical problems. 
On the other hand
,  old
people
also
 play significant roles in indigenous cultural
values
.  To explain it , the lives of old
people
 are totally different from the younger generation because they have done everything by themselves and 
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 of hard work. That's why they are more experienced as compared to youngsters
,
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 because they learn all things from their personal experience.
For instance
, because older
people
, youngsters can learn accurate education about cultural
values
 because of their lifestyles and moral
values
.  In my mind ,
although
 young
people
 can  get all types of information on the internet or
books
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 , these things cannot deny the importance of old generation knowledge where children learn more
cultural
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values
 and their struggles.  In conclusion,  
both
 generations give
benefits
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to
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 cultural
values
 in order to their own styles. I
also
 believe that
both
 are vital for growing cultural
values
.
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