Tourism is an ever growing industry. What benefits do you think tourism brings to individuals and society?

It is commonly believed that

traveling

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travelling

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has

became

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become

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an popular and welcomed

events

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among different

ages

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age

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of

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apply

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groups. In the

mean while

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,

tourism

has

became

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become

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a promising area for society and be seen as

make

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making

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consistengly

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consistent

consistently

success in the future. For

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the individual

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individual

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individuals

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,

traveling

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travelling

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is a fast and efficient method to have a

clam

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calm

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and

relaxing

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relax

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. Nowadays,

people

hardly have extra times to have a break, most of them have to work time in order to excel in

company

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the company

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,

for example

, it is widely be seen that

people

work overtime until 9 pm in many big companies in big cities.

People

can gain a chance to have a break and restore energy during spare time.

Moreover

, visiting a new site is

also

learning the local history and

broaden

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the horizon

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horizon

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.

On the other hand

,

tourism

have

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been seen as

the

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promising area and will promote

the

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apply

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fundamental facilities development and public transport.

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, local authorities will promote well-equipped fundamental facilities and public transportation

system

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systems

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in order to absorb more tourists, which can

also

benefit local

citizens

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citizens'

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living. What's more,

government

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the government

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will enhance the service standard of

tourism

,

such

as

hotel

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hotels

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,

food

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and food

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installment

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, which is increasing the standard of local service industries in the

mean while

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. In conclusion,

tourism

is a win-win industry, which let

people

live in other cities have the chance to go outside, but

also

bring

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brings

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input

for

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to

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local

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the local

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economy. The city,

where

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which

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owns

variety

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a variety

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of

tourism

resources should pay close attention to it.