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Nowadays many people travel to foreign countries for pleasure. Some believe this travel has a negative impact on the countries travelled to. To what extend do you agree or disagree?

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In
21st
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the 21st
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 century, most of the world's population prefers to travel abroad for pleasure. One part of the
people
believe
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believes
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 that
this
 incorrectly affects the
countries
 in which these
people
 have vacationed, while others do not agree with
this
 statement.I completely disagree with
this
 statement, as tourism promotes the economy and culture of the
host
countries
. On the one hand,
tourists
 can harm the
countries
 they have visited.
Firstly
, among ordinary
tourists
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,tourists
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 there may be criminals who may defy the established rules in
countries
.
Secondly
, it is the harm that the ecology of the
host
country
 receives.
For example
, according to volunteer companies, the amount of garbage left by
tourists
 from other
countries
 is growing,
in famous
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 tourist places of Kazakhstan.
On the other hand
, visiting foreign
countries
 has a list of advantages for both the
host
country
 and
tourists
.
Firstly
, tourism improves the
country
's economy, promotes tourism companies,
the
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and the
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country
's attractions around the world and
also
 increases the employment of the population.
Secondly
,
this
 is a good opportunity to find a new social environment and friends for everyone. While
traveling
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travelling
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, a person can meet
people
 who are
also
 visiting the assigned
country
 or meet
people
 from the
host
country
, which will broaden
people
's minds and help in future promotion. In conclusion, the pros outweigh the cons and visiting other
countries
 for pleasure will improve many aspects of these
countries
 and the identity of
tourists
 should be checked so that they do not harm
countries
.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Cultural exchanges
  • Global connections
  • Tourism boosts
  • Local economy
  • Over-tourism
  • Environmental degradation
  • Landmarks
  • Commodification of culture
  • Authentic cultural expressions
  • Cultural homogenization
  • Tourism infrastructure
  • Public services
  • Disrespect local customs
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