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Nowadays, tourism is developing flourishingly and more and more people 　　travel abroad. When people visit others countries, facing the local customs 　　and behaviors, should imitate it or not, there is a hot debate.

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Some
people
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 hold that we should imitate the local
customs
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 and
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behaviors
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 of 　　the foreign country. First of all, respect is one of the most important 　　factors
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while
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when
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 we visit
others
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 countries. Understanding and following their 　　
way
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 of life shows our respect for the local
people
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 and
thus
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 makes it easier 　　to establish good
relationship
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relationships
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 with them.
Secondly
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, many embarrassments and 　　conflicts are
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the results
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results
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result
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 of differences in
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custom
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customs
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 and traditions between the 　　tourists and the locals, the solution to which would be for the visitors to 　　
appreciated
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 and imitate local
culture
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 and
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behaviors
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. If we don’t 　　experience their
customs
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 and
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behaviors
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 by ourselves, it is hard to 　　understand the local
people
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 and
culture
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. By doing things
according to
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 their 　　
custom
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, we can better understand them and become more tolerant toward 　　differences, the very quality that enable us to live in harmony.
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, 　　
the
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foreign
custom
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 and
traditional
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 always seems fascinating to visitors 　　from other parts of the world, the
imitating
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imitation
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 of which makes the
travelers
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traveler's
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 　　life more
colorful
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colourful
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. 　　On the other side,
however
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, those who oppose the above viewpoint believe 　　that the host country should welcome
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culture different
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cultural differences
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. In the first place, 　　as a kind of unofficial ambassadors,
travelers
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travellers
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 bring
different
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culture
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 to 　　the destination country, which not only enriches their lives but promote 　　
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mutual understanding
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 as well.
Besides
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, imitating is not the best or the 　　only
way
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 to understand
the
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local
customs
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 and
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behaviors
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 well. The 　　understanding of the foreign
culture
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also
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 can be through careful observing 　　and intently perceiving. What’s more, for any nation to preserve its 　　unique
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culture
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cultural
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heritages
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heritage
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,
she
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 has to first embrace cultural
difference
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differences
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 in 　　order to increase the awareness of its own
culture
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 for its citizens. In 　　addition, it is unrealistic to expect visitors coming after to readily pick 　　up the local
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custom
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customs
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 for their own
culture
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 and deep-tooted and dearest to 　　them. And we are experiencing a kind of cultural integration, whose 　　advantages far outweigh its disadvantages. 　　
People
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of
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 both sides have their own sound
reason
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 to support their opinions. 　　Taking all the above into consideration, to be honest, it is difficult for 　　me to make a decision and I have to hold a balance point of view. It is 　　need not
to
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imitate
the
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foreign
customs
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 and
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behaviors
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 completely, and at 　　the same time, understanding the local
culture
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through
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this
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 kind of
way
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 is 　　not a bad
way
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.
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