Nowadays, tourism is developing flourishingly and more and more people travel abroad. When people visit others countries, facing the local customs and behaviors, should imitate it or not, there is a hot debate.
Some
people
hold that we should imitate the local customs
and behaviors
of the foreign country. First of all, respect is one of the most important factors Change the spelling
behaviours
while
we visit Correct word choice
when
others
countries. Understanding and following their Correct quantifier usage
other
way
of life shows our respect for the local people
and thus
makes it easier to establish good relationship
with them. Fix the agreement mistake
relationships
Secondly
, many embarrassments and conflicts are Correct article usage
the results
results
of differences in Fix the agreement mistake
result
custom
and traditions between the tourists and the locals, the solution to which would be for the visitors to Fix the agreement mistake
customs
appreciated
and imitate local Wrong verb form
appreciate
culture
and behaviors
. If we don’t experience their Change the spelling
behaviours
customs
and behaviors
by ourselves, it is hard to understand the local Change the spelling
behaviours
people
and culture
. By doing things according to
their custom
, we can better understand them and become more tolerant toward differences, the very quality that enable us to live in harmony. Thirdly
, the
foreign Correct article usage
apply
custom
and traditional
always seems fascinating to visitors from other parts of the world, the Replace the word
traditions
imitating
of which makes the Replace the word
imitation
travelers
life more Change noun form
traveler's
travelers'
colorful
. On the other side, Change the spelling
colourful
however
, those who oppose the above viewpoint believe that the host country should welcome culture different
. In the first place, as a kind of unofficial ambassadors, Replace the word
cultural differences
travelers
bring Change the spelling
travellers
different
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a different
culture
to the destination country, which not only enriches their lives but promote mutual-understanding
as well. Correct your spelling
mutual understanding
Besides
, imitating is not the best or the only way
to understand the
local Correct article usage
apply
customs
and behaviors
well. The understanding of the foreign Change the spelling
behaviours
culture
also
can be through careful observing and intently perceiving. What’s more, for any nation to preserve its unique culture
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cultural
heritages
, Fix the agreement mistake
heritage
she
has to first embrace cultural Correct pronoun usage
it
difference
in order to increase the awareness of its own Fix the agreement mistake
differences
culture
for its citizens. In addition, it is unrealistic to expect visitors coming after to readily pick up the local custom
for their own Fix the agreement mistake
customs
culture
and deep-tooted and dearest to them. And we are experiencing a kind of cultural integration, whose advantages far outweigh its disadvantages. People
of
both sides have their own sound Change preposition
on
reason
to support their opinions. Taking all the above into consideration, to be honest, it is difficult for me to make a decision and I have to hold a balance point of view. It is need not Fix the agreement mistake
reasons
to
imitate Remove the word
apply
the
foreign Correct article usage
apply
customs
and behaviors
completely, and at the same time, understanding the local Change the spelling
behaviours
culture
through
Change preposition
in
this
kind of way
is not a bad way
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