You have seen an advertisement in an Australian magazine for someone to live with a family for six months and look after their six year old child. Write a letter to the parents. In your letter, Explain why you would like the job Give details of why you would be a suitable person to employ. Say how you would spend your free time while you are in Australia. Write at lease 150 words.

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Dear Mr Collin, I am writing in connection with an advertisement that I have seen in an Australian magazine. The description of the job describes that I have to live with a family for six months and need to take care of their six-month-old baby. I would like to apply for the given job as I find it convenient for me, especially at

this

age as I can not stand for long hours.

Besides

, at the same time, it will help me to earn a decent amount of money as well. I think that I would be a suitable candidate to employ as previously I used to work at a nursing home for children.

Hence

, I am just not aware of what diet should be given to the child but

also

know how to handle the situation in case of emergency. In my leisure time, I would like to explore Australia as it is known as a scenic country with many adventurous places

such

as beaches and hill stations. Please feel free to contact me if you need more details. I really hope that you would consider me for the offered job in view of my past experience. Yours sincerely, Gurpreet Kaur

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