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Many people believe that living in a city life offers greater benefits as compared to the countryside? To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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In
this
 day and age, place of living has become a salient aspect of one’s
life
. As we all know, different
people
 have radically different preferences over where to live. It has been seen that some individuals prefer to live in urbanized
cities
 as it provides more opportunities in comparison to living in rural
areas
. Residing in a big city offers
a
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better
facilities
 and it helps
people
 to build a better
career
life
 by providing a variety of
work
 options.
To begin
 with, urbanized
areas
 are usually equipped with better
facilities
 that
increases
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quality
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 of
life
 for
people
. Medical institutes are more enhanced and prepared, they contain more advanced medical technology that can aid in treating most
of
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the diseases. Different university branches are
also
 present in big
cities
 with more study fields and options.
Moreover
, urbanized
areas
 have a greater selection of different food choices,
thus
 residents can try a wide variety of restaurants.
For instance
,
people
 residing in
cities
 have access to food from different parts of the world, and for
them
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 it is more accessible
comparable
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compared
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 to
people
 living in villages. Admittedly, being in a big
a
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city open
wide
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 door for
people
 to try and take advantage of
different
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the different
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facilities
 that
available
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are available
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. Other than
this
, advanced
areas
 are hubs for golden
career
 opportunities. Urbanized
areas
 provide plenty of job offers that can accommodate many
people
 with different skills. Doctors, engineers, and even uneducated individuals can find suitable
work
environment
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environments
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 and practice their jobs. To illustrate, an electrical engineer has a way higher chance of finding a good
work
 offer with a high salary if they live in a big city rather than
a
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 countryside. Admittedly, more
work
 opportunities provided in big
cities
 are extremely important for personal and
career
 growth. All in all, it seems that residing in an urbanized area
have
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 a
postive
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positive
 impact on
someones
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life
 and
career
. Big
cities
 contain more
facilities
such
 as hospitals and universities, that
aim
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 to make
people
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people's
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life
 easier in many ways. Job offers are widely diverse and numerous in
cities
,
thus
 it can accommodate different
people
 with different skills. The world would definitely be a better place if
people
 took advantage of all the
chance
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chances
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 that big
cities
 provide and understood how to live in it correctly.
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