In the future all cars, buses and trucks will be driverless. The only people travelling inside these vehicles will be passengers. Do you think the advantages of driverless vehicles outweigh the disadvantages?

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future roads will be busy with autonomous

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which will be bringing only passengers.

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driverless cars can reduce fatal incidents and save the time of the passengers but will

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jobs and less private security.

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acknowledging that there are drawbacks, the essay will argue that the advantages of self-driving

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outweigh the disadvantages. The risk of happening fatal incidents can be significantly decreased by automation.

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of the crashes on the roads are caused by human errors

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as drunk driving and distracted driving. As the automated

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are based on

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programs, they have no emotions triggered by external influences.

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, they can eliminate dangerous and risky driver

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. According to McKinsey, it’s estimated that automated

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could cut down accident fatalities by as much as 90

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, with the help of robotic driving, a passenger can perform other tasks

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of spending time driving. It helps a very busy person save time and do other productive

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while commuting.

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, the people who are depending on driving to make a living will lose their jobs if computer-controlled

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replace humans. The careers

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as truck

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, bus and taxi

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will become obsolete.

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risk because driverless cars need internet connectivity to be controlled. That can lead to possible different crimes by hacking into the system.

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, a hacker can easily kidnap a passenger by changing his or her destination in the program. In conclusion,

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driverless

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can make jobs lost for

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and have insecure privacy, I believe that there will be solutions to solve these issues over

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and they will greatly improve the lives of most people as well as create

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convenient and smart society in the future.

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, the positive effects of automated

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definitely outweigh the drawbacks.