Some people believe that children’s leisure activities must be educational, otherwise they are a complete waste of time. Do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your aswer and include any relevant examples from your experience.

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general education, minors often develop their own

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related to some specific kinds of sports, arts and entertainment. It is argued that these

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are useless unless they render kids educational benefits. I totally disagree that

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only stand for educational purposes. Analysing how

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help with creativity, as well as the importance of relaxing will prove my opinion.

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, entertaining

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possess the means to encourage children and adolescents to explore and create something.

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, I used to be a faithful reader of detective novels when I was in junior school, having acquired lots of fun from these novels, I started to create my own story when I went to senior school, where my work was quite popular among my classmates,

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I became a writer and an editor for my university magazine, I just continue writing since senior school and now writing has become my part-time job. Had it not been for indulging in detective novels, I would never develop the idea of creating my own fiction.

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, my personal experience makes it clear that

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that are irrelevant to study can be the best motivation for people to start creating.

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, relaxing is necessary for effective learning, as

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of a proper amount could assist the students to perform better.

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, having suffered from procrastination, I once tried to cram one week before,

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I pushed myself as hard as I could , I failed to memorize everything at once because my brain was too tired to function properly,

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I did not get a good grade at that exam, from which I learned the lesson that our brains need to rest for better performance,

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another reason why entertainment is so important for education. In conclusion,

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for relaxing give children and juveniles the best motivation for creation and innovation, as well as pertain to better achievements in educational area.

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,

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without educational purposes should exist and be welcomed. After a thorough analysis of

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statement, encouraging students to develop their own

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for entertainment and distribute their time properly is both reasonable and intelligent.