Your have just read an article in a national newspaper which claims that town centers in your country all look very similar to each other. You don't fully agree with this opinion. Writer a letter to the editor of the newspaper. In your letter say which points in the article you agree with explain ways in which your town center is different from most other town centers. offer to give a guided tour of your town to the writer of the article.

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Dear sir/ Maam. I am writing
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letter to you recent article which published in
last
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week,23rd April in Nationa newspaper.
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of all, the Documentary gives a brief introduction about Colombo city
it
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was appreciated.
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, I agreed with some of the points which you mentioned.
moreover
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, Colombo was a colony of Britch,
therefore
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building structure was similar to others not only that, Sir Edward Colony designed the city centre as a printout of London 12th avenue.
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, I would point out some facts I disagreed with,The town centre is situated on the riverside of Mahavali and on the south side surrounding by piduruthalagala mountain. I would suggest that come over to your town
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you can have a look at how the city centre was designed and
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I am happy to offer free guidance about the town. I looked forward to your kind reply. Yours Faithfully, Thisara Madusanka.
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

  • firstly
  • secondly
  • thirdly
  • in additional
  • moreover
  • also
  • for example
  • for instance
  • therefore
  • however
  • although
  • even though
  • despite

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