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Caring for children is an important thing of the society. It is suggested that all mothers and fathers should be required to take childcare training courses. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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Children
 are the future of society. They can able to turn a new way. Many
people
 argue that every parent
need
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 a training
course
 for childcare
for
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 good manner. I totally agree with
this
 statement and I will discuss
in
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it in
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 the upcoming paragraphs.
To begin
 with, nowadays many
parents
 are doing
job
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jobs
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 day to night so at that time their
children
 are alone at the home.
For example
, in the modern
era
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 mother and father both are working from 7 a.m to 8 p.m job in any company.
However
, they have no time for
of
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spring to learn things like manners and how to talk with the older
people
. So,
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those reason
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those reasons
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,
parents
 should be essential to the childcare training courses.
Although
, in
this
course
, they learn new things
likewise
 how to treat our seeds, how to control them and so on.
As a result
, their
children
 are
treating
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 properly and behave
as
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like
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a
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good
person
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people
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.
Therefore
, every mother and father should join the childcare training
course
.
Furthermore
, we know about in the
present-day
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,
the
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children
 are used
a
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very rough language while they are talking with their
parents
 for friends.
For instance
, in the modern era, seeds have no manners
how
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on how
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 to communicate with other
people
.
As a result
, they are going
wrong
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 way and playing with their future, as well as careers.
However
, when the age of
children
 is small at that time
parents
 should take part in the training
course
 and treat their
children
. To conclude, for
the
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 better life and
good
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 career,
the
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manner
is play
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plays
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 a vital role in life.
Hence
,
parents
 should join training courses and treat
their
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they're
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of
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apply
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spring to how to behave with other
people
.
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