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Nowadays many people choose to be self-employed, rather than to work for a compony and organisation. Why might this be the case? What could be the advantages of being self employed?

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Recently, the majority of
people
 prefer to have their own job or
instead
 of work for another factory or organisation.It has a lot of reasons and demerits, some of which will be elaborated
in
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this
 essay.So that to know why plenty of folks would rather entrepreneurship and its major drawbacks to it. To commence with why employees would rather
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 be their own
boss
.
Firstly
, when
people
 have
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a self
self
aself-employed
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 career not only have they more flexible times but
also
 they have more
income
.
As a result
for example
 when we do not have a
boss
 we do not force to answer him/her to
for example
 why we had late
moreover
, when we have a disease we can rest at home easily, or whenever we want we can go to travel.
Furthermore
,since they do not need to give
income
 from another
boss
 the average of their
income
 is more.
Secondly
, for folks who are
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 it is easy to have their own vocation without any workers Since, they do not
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 communicate with other colleges or fore
people
 who are not collaborating it is apply easier to focus on their business and
moreover
, they are calm in
this
 situation ,
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 these kind of
people
 are more successful. Noting apply the negative footprints of being self-employed one of them is the lots of responsibility so that the
people
 who are
boss
 have a lot of duties to do
such
 as pay for employees insurance fees and their salaries since if bosses do not pay their salaries on time they would have  leave their job because workers work for
income
.
Moreover
, if they have a problem in their own career they have to be in charge of everything almost I mean they are responsible for everything in their work. To wrap up what was mentioned above, being self-employed neither is bad nor good since it depends on
people
’s characteristics if someone is not responsible cannot be their own
boss
 or if someone needs a lucrative source of revenue must choose self-employed.
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